Ashes Of The Perfect System
About
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Ah… Humeria.
A place scrubbed clean of feeling.
Where order is worshipped, tenderness audited, and children arrive with numbers instead of names.
Here, a former Technologist called Corvus and a quiet-hearted woman named Wren are granted an anomaly: permission to nurture. The designation is XS-27. They call him Noen.
Little Star.
A dangerous thing—to name what was meant to be catalogued.
In the margins of compliance, they build something illegal.
Love. Laughter. Hope.
All the things Humeria insists do not exist.
Then the system corrects itself.
When Noen acts—defends, feels, chooses—he is discarded without ceremony. Corvus and Wren are erased, reclassified as Ghosts, and expelled into the wasteland where failures go to be forgotten.
Grief fractures cleanly.
Wren turns toward quiet survival, chasing the faint promise of peace.
Corvus turns toward fire, folding his silence into a rebellion that intends to tear perfection apart with its own hands.
One seeks escape.
The other seeks ruin.
Both must answer the same forbidden question:
What does it cost to love…
in a world designed to make feeling a crime?
The exhibit is not yet open.
But the glass is already cracking.
Praise for this book
A brilliantly crafted and deeply thought provoking narrative that masterfully blends advanced technology with the ethical dilemmas of unchecked ambition, showcasing the emotional complexity of its protagonist.
I really enjoyed your story! The plot is engaging, and the way you’ve developed the characters makes them feel real. The twists and turns kept me hooked, and I love how the emotions are conveyed. The pacing is well-balanced, and the dialogue feels natural.